JellyDraft's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Perfect Home]

I really didn't like this submission. The drawings were flat, stale, and not even shaded. The animation was almost all tweened(and not in a good way). The sound effects were terrible. The voice acting seemed forced and it wasn't great acting either. The jokes were excrutiatingly awful, but the lip syncing was OK(still badly tweened). Overall I didn't like this much at all, and I know you have more talent than this. Nice try...I guess...

DannX3anim8ion responds:

As for the animation and artwork i agree, it was very stale and motionless. I had kinda tried making all of the symbols first as a way to save time and to make it look a bit cleaner than my last entry.
As for the voice actors personally i thought they did a pretty good job!
And as for the jokes, i know the same joke was drawn out and it really only had 2 other elephant puns besides ele... but hey they weren't unbearable.
overall you make a very good and valid point this really isn't my best work and next round i really do need to kick up a few notches.
thanks for the review!

[Aminal Crossing]

I was just wondering. WHy did this get suh a low score? The animation is amazing and the voice acting is good too, and the idea works ife. The only thing I didn't like was the lack of shding. Other than that, keep it up.

TravelSizedLions responds:

Dunno, really. Stuff just happens. I'm just glad most of the reviewers liked it. :)

[Wheel of Misery]

HIlarious! Best of luck to you in NATA this year :)

CyanSandwich responds:

Hey thanks man. If only I read this earlier, then I would've had better NATA luck.

[Best Burrito Ever]

Not bad. But...I'm giving you a two for using your age to get good ratings.

Yusuf responds:

Wow you're a dick. I wasn't using it for ratings, I was asking for animation-related critique, but you obviously can't read

[MBR: Derek vs Nivlac]

Ah maplestory. Its a shame the game has gone so downhill. Anyway, this was pretty amazing. I've seen plenty of maplestory sprite animations before, but none that came out this cool. I liked the effects, the animation was smooth, and the little anime faces that show up in the corners were awesome. Keep it up man!

spritefan responds:

Thanks! :P

[Quiet]

I actually really liked this. It somehow reminded me of the movie 9(which is my favorite movie by the way). The style and art was really cool. It was a great length and the story was cool too. Keep at it man!

~JellyDraft

JuanDiablos responds:

I also love 9 :D Im planning a new series that wont be stick animation and It's partly inspired by 9 so watch this space :D

[Christmas is Here]

CUte & nice

This just gives me a fuzzy feeling inside :3 The lip syncing and aqnimation weren't perfect, but all together it was so nicely done that ill give you a 10 :) Congratz on 5th. You're very talented by the way :D

GamekrazzyProduction responds:

yeah... I'll admit I could have worked a bit more on the lip syncing.
Thanks for your kind words though!

[Pokemon Bash]

Not bad.

The joke is overused though. "Tell my wife and children i love them...etc." also "why why would you do this to me." I've seen many parodies like this. It was however somehow different and stood out. I really liked the animation style, and your humor isn't bad. Keep at it and you'll be really popular on newgrounds someday. Goodluck!

~JellyDraft

OnionsXD responds:

I haven't seen any parodies with those kind of jokes. o_o

However, after I made this animation I realized that some popular internet comic artist had made a 1 pg comic similiar to this. I was shocked.

I'm not sure how my animation would stand out. but that's great to hear! Thanks for the review! :D

[Bad Clown Joke]

Everyone who laughed at this is going to hell.

Cya in hell guys! :D

Whitnemp responds:

you sir, are clever

[POP! an adventure]

Turtleco o' turtleco

I love tho art, tho turtleco.

No for legit now, I love your work a ton. This has inspired me not to rush my animation, but to take much time and make every frame count. By the way what program did you use for the stop motion?

turtleco responds:

I think that you're better off not wasting time like I did, lololololol.

btw I used helium frog.