JellyDraft's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Day 3: Think]

Made me laugh a bit.

But nothin too special. It also includes clocks so another point off.

Sorry puntoue, but clockofblob kinda beat you. The infection did suck...

ClockOfBlob responds:

Why do you not like clocks? :'(

[Little Big Apocalypse 1]

Somethings lacking.

When I saw this in the flash portal with a high ranking I had high hopes. I love the game Little Big planet, and I was happy someone was finally making an animation about it. With all of these high hopes I was sort of disappointed when I clicked the video. The story line was kind of cool, but the animation was un-detailed and not smooth. I'm guessing the fps you used is 12. I also thought the drawing was deeply lacking something. I don't mean to troll and I have nothing against you in particular, but with such high hopes, I was let down. Congratz on the high score, and good luck for the future.

~JellyDraft

JMartin97 responds:

21 fps :D

Sorry you didnt enjoy it. This is only the first episode, remember :)

[Dark Madness (trailer)]

Take your time.

If your going to make a trailer take more time perfecting it. Don't throw it together in 8 minutes. If I were you, I would take some online flash tutorials. Don't be impatient. Take your time and try to make your animations better instead of making them in 8 minutes. Also try and check your grammar, I had a hard time focusing on the basic animation apposed to the bad English.

[the special present]

Classic turtleco

I have always followed you and your animations, and loved them. I was petrified in suspense, and when it came out I laughed. Your animations are always so random, and way better than what I can do so far. I also have a question for you. How did you make the clothes masked on the child? Ive been trying to use that technique for a while. It would be really helpful in the future. Thanks!

~JellyDraft

turtleco responds:

all you have to do is put the cloth texture on your stage, use the eyedropper to copy the texture, and use the paint bucket to color in whatever you wish, then you can delete the cloth texture off of the stage. Its a fairly simple process.

if you have questions about me, send me a PM.

P.S. I'm glad that you've been following my work, that's a real boost of confidence.

[Santa Saw Trap]

Newgrounds sucks at celebrating christmas...

Thats what the losers say! MWA HA HA xD

[The Death Ball pt 2]

A lot to improve on.

I can see you are really starting to understand flash a little better. When I started animating, mine looked a little like yours. I've been at it for 2 years and I can definitely see an improvement. Next time, try to take a little more time on your animations and try to find better sound effects, instead of having the same bouncing sound over and over(maybe some music too). I can see that you are getting better. Just keep it up and still animate. If you need any more feedback or help I would be delighted to help. Keep up the good work.

~JellyDraft

flyingkitty01 responds:

Thanks, I have been taking tutorials and I found a really good one today and it really helped me. So when I upload more animations they may be better. Thanks, if I need further help I'll ask you.

[School - Day One]

My alarm clock makes the exact same sound xD

I always enjoy your animations. Good luck for the future :D

[Woe is Me]

loved it.

I've loved all of your pieces from the first one that you posted on newgrounds to this one. I like how u mixed the humor in there with it too. I don't think any comment that I've seen said this but he singing about his XBOX! You are truly inspiring. :)

[Mulan Kinetic Typography]

AWESOME

That was by far the best music video that suited the song. I can't believe you can take words like that and make a story as well as you did. You simply amaze me. 10/10 and 5/5. You deserved it! I also think you did a great choice of a song(its one of my favorites)

~JellyDraft

kazoodac responds:

Thank you very much! I'm gald you enjoyed it!

Hopefully I'll get to do another project like this some day, and utilize the critiques I've received to make it even better than this one!