Pretty bad. Work on the animation. The story wasn't that funny. ANd last but not least the voice acting was horrid. Next time higher voice actors.
Pretty bad. Work on the animation. The story wasn't that funny. ANd last but not least the voice acting was horrid. Next time higher voice actors.
What the hell?? Amazing, but fucked up..
How does this not have a daily feature???
Genius. You sir are insanly amazing. The whole thing is extremly well thought out, and well animated too. Keep up the amazing clever work.
HIlarious! Best of luck to you in NATA this year :)
Hey thanks man. If only I read this earlier, then I would've had better NATA luck.
The animation is great. You never fail to impress, Funy-mony.
First of all, it loops, therefore making the sounds overlap with themselves the second time around. Learn some basic as2 and make a play button. Second of all, most of this was just text(going extremely fast). If you had worked on this for a couple more hours, got some voice actors and made a better plot line I really you could pull it together and make a really nice, quality flash. Take some time on your work. Newgrounds isn't going away.
There wasn't a whole lot of animation in this, therefore you really can't expect a great review. I liked the voice acting, but the loss of plot and animation brought the score down to 2.5. Keep trying-but next time try and add more than just flashy pictures.
Not bad. But...I'm giving you a two for using your age to get good ratings.
Wow you're a dick. I wasn't using it for ratings, I was asking for animation-related critique, but you obviously can't read
Age 27, Male
Animator
Edinboro University
Los Angeles
Joined on 10/31/10